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PostSubject: I Dream of Winter   Sat Dec 11, 2010 2:29 am


A wintry night
I walk along on snowflakes, Their fragile bones crunching
Under my frozen boots. Earth swollen under a pearly blanket,
Overhead: A giant stuffed white pillow, Lit up from the lights of so many streetlamps
Hangs over us, stuffing, suffocating,
Winds howl, screech, yank at trees and tops a desperate attempt to get the pillow off
but it won’t go, and every second the air turns drier, and my nose dries up - but the cloud just won’t go.
I hurry along; my frigid breath escapes From puffed-up red cheeks, In search of warmth.

Suddenly,
_a white speck
just

Taps_________________at
_my shivering shoulder
I look up.
Somewhere above, someone has finally
Shoved the pillow
over so hard
that it
tore
And out
Came, pouring,
The stuffing down,
Tiny specks of white
As_____as
______Light___light
______Feathers___Falling.
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PostSubject: Re: I Dream of Winter   Sat Dec 11, 2010 2:30 am

Nothing gives one an excuse not to study for exams like the act of writing poetry. Smile

Thoughts? Emotions? Ideas?

Keep it as a shape poem(?), or change it back to the original format I had it in:

I dream of winter
A wintry night
I walk along on snowflakes,
Their fragile bones crunching
Under my frozen boots.
Earth swollen under a pearly blanket,
Overhead: A giant stuffed white pillow, Lit up
from the lights of so many streetlamps
Hangs over us, stuffing, suffocating,
Winds howl, screech, yank at trees and tops
a desperate attempt to get the pillow off
but it won’t go, and every second
the air turns drier, and my nose dries up
but the cloud just won’t go.
I hurry along; my frigid breath escapes
From puffed-up red cheeks,
In search of warmth.
Suddenly, a white speck
Taps at my shivering shoulder
I look up.
Somewhere above, someone has finally
Shoved the pillow
over so hard
that it
tore
And out
Came, pouring,
The stuffing down,
Tiny specks of white
As _______as
____Light____feathers
Falling.



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