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Dark S3cret
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PostSubject: MHL   Thu Apr 29, 2010 3:00 pm

Broken once, never healed
It begins to crumble, and you stumble
Desperate to hide the spidery cracks
Through which

Your secrets spilled, slipping so slowly
Tantalizingly through the tangled web of lies
Woven to conceal the torturous truth
Desperate you realize

Your confessions seem to linger in the air
Spoken words heavy on your conscience
Marked like the scars of a violent encounter
You can never forget

It replays like a broken record in your head
And you try to block out the memory
Of hearing her voice, feeling her gaze
Cling to you

Or so you imagine, so you close your eyes
And shut the door with a click but it’s
Impossible; she’s colonized every thought
In your brain

You thought admitting it would be akin
To exorcizing it but you can’t get rid of it
It simply intensifies every time you try
So you don’t

And it makes you feel dirty

But you
Just can’t

Stop
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PostSubject: Re: MHL   Thu Apr 29, 2010 4:12 pm

I like this Smile

"Your confessions seem to linger in the air
Spoken words heavy on your conscience"
- no regrets I hope?

And again. You know that you get in my brain and write down my thoughts. Frequently.
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PostSubject: Re: MHL   Thu Apr 29, 2010 4:28 pm

Oh nono. No regrets. Just... another take on your idea where it "becomes real" when you speak it aloud and confess.
Simply trying to verbalize a frustration, which you understand well. Razz

Athough, you know, as well as I, it's not so much because of my psychic skills, more because we're both feeling the same things and are stuck in similar situations.
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PostSubject: Re: MHL   Fri Apr 30, 2010 11:21 pm

Yay! You took down the tagline!

"she’s colonized every thought" - there it is again ^_^ I love you for that phrase.

I particularly enjoyed the rhythm of the poem.
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PostSubject: Re: MHL   Sat May 01, 2010 3:54 pm

YAY I did take down the tagline. Just for you. Very Happy I also reorganized the forum a little, incase you did not notice. Very Happy

Good! I don't think there was much else to enjoy asides from the rhythm. XD Since really it was me just venting.
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